đŸ„‘ MORE bad writing advice (q&a)

more awful answers AND a tip from an expert

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There’s no shortage of bad advice on the Internet.

Here’s some more that my readers have received:

Super strictly following show don’t tell initially tripped me up on my current MS. My editor couldn’t connect to my character!! Which is like the opposite effect of what the advice is supposed to produce 😂

Cathryn deVries, author of Son of Osivirius

I love how this comment shows us the practical effects of misguided writing advice. Strict adherence to a “principle” can lead us into murky waters, as we discussed in an earlier post. Imagine having a friend who always tried to show their emotions and desires instead of telling you what they needed every so often. Murky, indeed—and that makes it hard to form a connection. Same goes for characters.

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Okay, back to business:

. . . the one that seems to get me stuck the most is the times I've been told that I should write to Market because it's the only way I'll sell books or get an agent

Heather Clark, @thethistlegirlwrites

Look, ma, another false dichotomy!

I can’t say it any better than John Truby, author of my beloved craft book The Anatomy of Story:

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One of the biggest mistakes writers make is to fall into the trap of either-or thinking: either I write what I care about, or I write what will sell. This is a false distinction . . . Your writing should mean a lot to you personally. But writing for an audience makes it a lot easier to do what you love.

John Truby, The Anatomy of Story, p. 36

Lots to unpack there. One thing I take away from this: if you don’t believe in what you’re writing, why would an agent? Write what you love and make it irresistible for the right audience .

Don’t take advice at face value. Consider it, play out the implications, and enjoy the process. You get to create stuff—isn’t that amazing?

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